the table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA
The table sheds lights on the percentage of people out of the employment age, average individual income and the ratio of those living in poverty in three different areas in The United Nation.
As can be seen from the table, those living in Utal has the least income. Besides, notwithstanding the dominant average individual income, the percentage of California's citizens living in poverty is also the highest.
When it comes to the data for those aged under 18 and those over 60, while California and Utal possess young populations, Florida’s data witnesses the contradictory pattern. Nearly more than a quarter of Utal's population aged under 18 (28%), while there is only 8% inhabitants are older than 60 years old. At the same time, 23% Florida ’s people are in their 60s and above, it is noteworthy that the total percentage of those out of the working age in Florida made up to 39% of its total residents, the highest in three mentioned states.
Considering the average income per person, the first position goes to California with 23000$, followed by Florida (22000$) and Utal (17000$). On the flip side, the amount of income per person does not goes in accordance with poverty level, since only 9% of Utal’s residence live below this lines compared to the relatively high percentage of that in California and Florida, 16% and 12% respectively.
- Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should takes responsibility 89
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- The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$23000'.
Suggestion: $23000
... first position goes to California with 23000$, followed by Florida 22000$ and Utal 17...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$22000'.
Suggestion: $22000
...fornia with 23000$, followed by Florida 22000$ and Utal 17000$. On the flip side, the ...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$17000'.
Suggestion: $17000
...0$, followed by Florida 22000$ and Utal 17000$. On the flip side, the amount of income...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...he amount of income per person does not goes in accordance with poverty level, since...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... only 9% of Utal’s residence live below this lines compared to the relatively high p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69589176526 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1959462506 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.625 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205971620292 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085902470274 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663414708168 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124044628361 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702878596485 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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