The given line chart gives information about the demographic data in percentage of American, Swedish, and Japanese whose age was 65 and higher. The statistics were reported every 20 years from 1940 to 2020 with a prediction in the year 2040.
Overall, from 1940 to 1980, the old population of the USA and Sweden similarly increased with a decrease in the figure of Japan. In the next 40 years, the proportion of Japanese and Swedish elderly tended to rise except for the declining inclination of the American old population. In the future, the three-figure is forecasted to stably increase, especially the Japanese old population.
In 1940, about 6% of Swedish and 9% of the American population were 65 or older. The two numbers surged to 14% and 15% respectively in 1980. 40 years later, Sweden's figure kept rising except for a slight decrease from approximately 20% to 18% in 2020, while the figure of the USA was down to only around 14-15%. In the next 2 decades, the two figures are expected to increase to 25% (Sweden) and 23% (the USA).
For the Japanese over-65-year-old population, starting from 5%, the figure dropped to 3% in 1960 and maintained stability until about 8 years later. Then, the figure increased in the last period (from 4% to 8%). In the next 20 years, the number is expected to rocket to about 27%).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pecially the Japanese old population. In 1940, about 6% of Swedish and 9% of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74782608696 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77738640385 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534782608696 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9849819371 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820430858585 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338465741509 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464261745055 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582980486155 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459802276872 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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