The table gives information about the manufacture of cars in Argentina, Australia and Thailand during the six years period between 2003 and 2009.
As can be seen from the chart, despite of insignificant decrease in the last two years, the majority of car production was made in Thailand while Argentina was the lowest comparison in three countries.
In 2003, the largest car was produced in Thailand at 700,000 cars while Argentina accounted for 4000,000 cars, doubling the figure of Australia ( just only 200,000 cars).In the next two years, the production of cars in Thailand increased and peaked at 1,119,000 cars; however, Argentina decreased by 200,000 cars. The opposite was true for Australia which rose at 400,000 cars.
Nevertheless, in 2009, Thailand was a slight decrease to 999,000 cars and Argentina went down to 161,000 cars. In contrast, the number of cars in Australian continued to show the rise of 600,000 cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18543046358 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72327994762 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0429942192 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123598068429 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079664006877 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515177834698 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996328646493 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422610314718 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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