The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australlan for last year .The ple chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australlan states .
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant .
You should write at least 150 words .
The table provides us with the information on the number of whole day stay in a government and privately owned hospitals in different states of australia for past year and the pie chart illustrates the same sets of information, but represented in percentages.
Overall, public hospitals had the highest number of stays, with private hospitals being the least. On pie chart public same day and over night stay make up more than half of both the stays in the past year.
From the table, highest number of stays was recorded in public general hospital, followed by private general hospitals. Whereas, the least number of stays was recorded in public and private psychiatric respectively. New south wales has the maximum number of patient stay a total of 8323 stays and South Australia has the least number of stay with 2209 stays.
Pie chart shows, public same day and overnight stay was two third of the total percentage. Private same day stay made a little more than a quarter and overnight stay had the lowest of 14%. By making public hospitals stay the maximum in the last year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...tays in the past year. From the table, highest number of stays was recorded in public ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86559139785 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51107501788 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.725640475 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476791311429 0.215688989381 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230741850453 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656325169156 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3278978004 0.15604864568 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987175072755 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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