The table below shows the numbers of visitor to ashdowm.Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished .the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period the sam

Essay topics:

The table below shows the numbers of visitor to ashdowm.Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished .the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period the same periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparsions where relevant.

The charts reveals that information of represention the number of visitor to ashdowm museum as well as the year before and the year after it was refurbished. It is gives two charts. The tabular chart and circular chart.

Moving a quick glance on the illustration, the year before refubishment number of visitors to ashdowm museum in 74,00 but then due the after year refusbishment are more than fall up number of visitors to ashdowm museum in 92,000.

On the flip side, the pie chart the result of survey of visitor satisfaction.Hence, few year back, the dissatisfied was higher visitor stisfaction in 40and nearly by declined was very staisfied in 30. Afterthat, the no respone the surveys of visitor satisfaction was very reduced proportion in 5. Otherwise, after year rufurbishment was boomed in very satisfied and satisfied increased the ratio was equal serveys of visitor satisfaction in 35 to 45. Last, the no response the dwellers was the very dissatisfied are same proprotion in 5.

To sum up, during the year after refusbishment are rose in 92,000.Then,in the before year and after year are equal ratio in satisfied 30 to 35.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...year refusbishment are more than fall up number of visitors to ashdowm museum in ...
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...esult of survey of visitor satisfaction.Hence, few year back, the dissatisfied was hi...
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... Otherwise, after year rufurbishment was boomed in very satisfied and satisfied i...
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...isfied and satisfied increased the ratio was equal serveys of visitor satisfactio...
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...n in 35 to 45. Last, the no response the dwellers was the very dissatisfied are s...
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... after refusbishment are rose in 92,000.Then,in the before year and after year are e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, then, well, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10658312713 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1560071645 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413297898292 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168799452572 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095130226405 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261078808104 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355452852519 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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