The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking how satisfied theu were with their visit, during the same two period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure for people who visited Ashdown Museum in the year before and after restoration process is depicted in the table. Meanwhile, the pie chart illustrates the result of a questionare about satisfaction levels of visitors o the museum during both given periods.
Overall, the number of visitors to to museum saw an upward trend during the time. With the pie chart, prior to restoration, the percentage of people who were dissatisfied accomplished the highest proportion, while that in the year after was satisfied.
Prior to Ashdown Museum refurbishment, the number of visitors was nearly 75,000 during the year. However, after being reconstructed, the museum witnessed a significant increase in the number of tourists of slightly under 20,000.
Regarding to the pie chart, the number of people dissatisfied in the year before refurbishment claimed 40% which dove to 15% in the year after restoration. Meanwhile, the figure for people who were satisfied during the year prior to renewing process accounted nearly a third then climbed remarkably to 40% after being refurbished. The similar trend was also witnessed in the percentage of very satisfied answers with a sinificant growth. The proportion of very dissatisfied result fell sligtly by 5% while that of no response remained constant at 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31400966184 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98248052569 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502415458937 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5127091267 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350636124513 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143788744514 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689905688725 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229334537261 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.008719281399 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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