The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of the surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the amount of people to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after renovation. The charts reveal the numbers of satisfaction by the visitors in the same two periods.
The number of visitors had increased rapidly within two years after renovated and it can be proved by the survey that had been conducted and also mostly positive reactions by the visitors.
Before refurbishment, the museum only had 74,000 visitors and majority of them showed their dissatisfaction to the museum while 10% was very dissatisfied about it. Only 30% visitors felt satisfied and less than 20% were very satisfied and small number of visitors prefer did not give any response regarding to the survey.
A year after, the visitors who were very satisfied increased sharply over 15% and it affected to dissatisfaction remained in number 15%. No response and very dissatisfaction were in 5% which means no response was stable. This progress had reached 92.000 visitors which mean it rose triples than before.
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- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of the surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.Summa 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he visitors in the same two periods. The number of visitors had increased rapidl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17365269461 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8007569806 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5954579582 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387125770901 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166248128019 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834945669379 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233289077416 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100271245907 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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