The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given illustrate the types of visitors for Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after the renewal of museum. it is evident that the rate of satisfied visitors rises after renewal. While the percentage of dissatisfied visitors decreased.
For the period of the year before renewing, it was noticed, the proportion of very satisfied visitors was 15%. However, the percentage of satisfied visitors rose to 30%. Moreover, the percentage of dissatisfied visitors increased to 40%, whereas, 5% of visitors do not care about the survey.
For the period of the year after refurbished, it was witnessed the percentage of very satisfied visitors was 35%, which was more than doubled the rates before. While, the percentage of satisfied visitors went up to 40%, which was more than by 10% the year before. Finally, the rate of careless visitors still the same before and after renewal, which was 5%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, moreover, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66687499186 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2524762185 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351822266663 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171312629041 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736978054824 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272035217125 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503606896822 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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