While the table illustrates the increase in the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum after its refurbishment, the pie charts depict the proportion of visitor satisfaction reacting to the change of the museum throughout the same time frame. Overall, as can be clearly seen, there existed a close correlation between the two figures.
Commencing at 74,000 people, the total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum surged to 92,000 people. Along with that was the increase in the proportion of satisfied visitors and the plunge in the percentage of dissatisfied one. Before the reconstruction, the majority of visitors was either dissatisfied or satisfied, at 40 per cent and 30 per cent respectively. However, the situation was quickly reversed as the proportion of satisfied visitors mounted to 40 per cent, held the largest segment, followed by the twofold increase of very satisfied visitors, from 15 per cent to 35 per cent to rank the second highest proportion of all the visitors after the museum refurbished. The dissatisfied visitors’ figure slumped by over a half to 15 per cent, being triple than the figure of very dissatisfied one after its halving. In both years, there was a tiny minority of the visitors, at 5 per cent to be more specific, did not respond to the survey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06103286385 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00138462026 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1265164485 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215322915095 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998067840501 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614652008083 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18279109509 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207976649438 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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