The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts and data illustrate the population of the ashdown museum before and after renovation.
it can be clearly seen that the population after rebuilding is increased. Overall, the level of dissatisfied is lower after reopening.
before reconstruction, there were 74000 peoples who came to visit ashdown museum, and it was rose significantly to 92000 persons after the renovation.
For the satisfaction questionnaire, the obvious change was that the level of dissatisfied, the highest opinion before renovation, was fell dramatically by 25% from 40% to 15%. The second-high difference was very satisfied, the initial status was 15% and increased to 35% significantly. A gradually change was occurred on satisfied, raised from 30% to 40% as well as became the highest opinion after reestablished. The circumstance of very dissatisfied was declined by 5% slightly, started from 10% and ended at 5%, which was same as the option of no response after reestablished, it was the only option that remains unchanged, kept at 5% and continued to be the lowest results with very dissatisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Before
...dissatisfied is lower after reopening. before reconstruction, there were 74000 people...
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Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('change') instead of another adjective.
...15% and increased to 35% significantly. A gradually change was occurred on satisfied, raised from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33526011561 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3031331535 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1379177514 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166416733134 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763895280492 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489004738831 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113323517086 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463913700994 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.