The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in the town who rode bicycles in 2011

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The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in the town who rode bicycles in 2011

The table compares the proportion of the population of one town who cycled in 2011 according to 5 age groups.
As it can be inferred from the data, in all age groups, the percentage of female cyclists was higher than that of male cyclists. Meanwhile, the lowest proportion of people riding bikes was recorded in the figure for the age of 40 to 59.
Both females and males in the 0-9 age group rode bikes and this proportion remained high in the figure for 10-17 years old females at about 42% while that of males declined by over half to less than 25%.
The figures for the 18-39 and 40-59 years old were much lower. In the former group, only about 17% of women cycled, compared with just under 10% of men. Among the 40-59 years old group, the figures dropped to only 12% for women and 8% for men. However, the proportion of those grew dramatically in the age of over 60 reaching 18,5% for women compared with in the excess of 13% for men.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38636363636 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18795744922 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9826134088 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166962022673 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817932166968 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992082274099 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136720572307 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116182027247 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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