The given table compares the proportion of the male and female riding rode bicycles in one town by age groups in 2012.
In general , the percentage of males and females from 0 to 9 years old was the highest . While the percentage of males and females from 40 to 59 years old was the lowest. And the percentage of females riding bicycles was more than that of male in all ages.
In terms of females , the percentage of females who rode bicycles from 0 to 9 years old was approximately 53% . About the age group from 10 to 19 years old , around 44% of females rode bicycles . While female adults from 20 to 39 years old only made up around 18% . The percentage of females over 60 years old , which rode bicycles , was approximately 20% more than that of the middle - aged group around 5%.
In terms of males , the percentage of males who rode bicycles from 0 to 9 years old was approximately 51% . Meanwhile , the proportion of males from 10 to 19 years old who rode bicycles less than that of females of the same age in 1 out of 2 , was 25%. The percentage of males who rode bicycles of age from 20 to 39 years old and from 40 to 59 years old was the lowest with around 11% for teenagers and around 9% for middles - aged . At the same time , the percentage of males over 60 years old using bikes was around 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23790322581 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37431971108 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.350806451613 0.547539520022 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6529575588 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5833333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242831086678 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139969202593 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10702305105 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217174825319 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127146111618 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 8.06136585366 73% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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