the table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.
summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features. and make any relevant comparisons.
The table depicts the data of seven different countries individual's savings from personal income in the form of percentage in 1970, 1990 and 2000.
Italy has highest savings compared to all others in 1970 and 1990 which was 29.5% and 17.6%. however, it reduces to 11.4% in 2000 and at the same year France and Japan shows at the top in savings by 13.6%. Germany's expense shows consistent in 1970 and 1990 about 13.8% then slight decrease by 2% in a next decade. While France, UK and Japan follow same tendency to expend more in the 2 decade after 1970 and less in the next decade.
Canada and USA were last in the savings list of countries. Canada was twice at the end in saving in 1970 and 2000 by saving just 5.6% and 1.9% respectively the same scenario of USA was in 1990 by 5.5%.
To conclude, it can be seen from the information that people of Italy saves more and expend less which was followed by France, Germany and Japan whilst Canada and USA were completely opposite of them.
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 69
- Many countries are still facing problems regarding a huge population To control the ever increasing population many people believe that Government can control the population through taxes To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 74
- Some people think that student should concentrate on all subjects at school other believe that the teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in To what extent do you agree with this view 78
- In the last 20 years there have been significant development in the field of information technology for ex the world wide web and communication by email However this developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future T 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...rcentage in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Italy has highest savings compared to all others in 1970 ...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...970 and 1990 which was 29.5% and 17.6%. however, it reduces to 11.4% in 2000 and at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46408839779 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22788299822 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.365078115 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221694169767 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103962811995 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919639922737 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153994864085 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10811006615 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.