The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

The table shows details of participation in a variety of cultural activities over a year, according to the age of the participants.

Overall, any performance, which includes dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting, had the highest level of participation, with 22% of respondents participating in the previous 12 months. By contrast, computer based activities had the lowest level of participation (6 per cent).

People aged between 45 and 74 years old were most likely to undertake any activity to do with crafts (22 per cent), while performances were more likely to be participated in by those aged 16 to 24 (35 per cent). The differences between age groups were particularly marked in the case of visual arts and writing categories, where participation rates were around three times higher for younger people than for the older ones. It is clear from the evidence that age plays a significant role in the popularity of the cultural activities listed.

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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264367816092 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.137931034483 0.116061578633 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0862068965517 0.0759168565197 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287356321839 0.0366838410393 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00574712643678 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.16091954023 0.155750635184 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0574712643678 0.0379272487307 152% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13948779678 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287356321839 0.0210936926555 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103448275862 0.0948980150116 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.00967000014798 178% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 967.0 1161.00487805 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.9 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15923566879 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350318471338 0.337110787985 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28025477707 0.247514529752 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203821656051 0.171178102325 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140127388535 0.112407865282 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13948779678 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.546246751206 121% => OK
Word variations: 64.5694716955 49.3433353143 131% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1666666667 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3581018904 42.9750493124 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 135.714022679 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 54.1921443737 47.7609492067 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.8 2.94281807926 95% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402273639481 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166441361876 0.181151798455 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0291823134266 0.0850326197045 34% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.686073484429 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181208989547 0.157042692854 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229927181379 0.228904883108 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102585104432 0.108899403657 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304327919745 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0444129328399 0.0812612215331 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310584295877 0.316326947829 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542202153617 0.0921553760075 59% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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