The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tabular chart illustrates the figures of the survey carried in a downtown restaurant with a small scale in a week of October 7th - 13th. It consists information of the sales of this restaurant in 2 sessions : Lunch and Dinner. In general, the revenues of the restaurant in Dinner is always higher than the income values in Lunch.
According to the graph, at $4.350, Friday Dinner is the time has the highest amount of income values. At the first 4 days of the week, the incomes ranges from over $ 3,600 to $ 3,800. After the peak on Friday, there is a slightly decrease at the weekends. Significantly, on Lunch Sunday, the value drops to $ 1.550 which is the lowest amount of revenues of the week.
To sum up, sales of the restaurant in a downtown business district which is conducted in this research mainly has a positive sign in week days, specially in Friday night
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... general, the revenues of the restaurant in Dinner is always higher than the inco...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
... the week, the incomes ranges from over $ 3,600 to $ 3,800. After the peak on Frida...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...the incomes ranges from over $ 3,600 to $ 3,800. After the peak on Friday, there is...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...800. After the peak on Friday, there is a slightly decrease at the weekends. Significantly, on Lunc...
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...ly, on Lunch Sunday, the value drops to $ 1.550 which is the lowest amount of reven...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...west amount of revenues of the week. To sum up, sales of the restaurant in a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in week days, specially in Friday night
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60029295225 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0885831134 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172803879384 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711572253732 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580721075614 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123721194967 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558004254836 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.