The given table embodies the data about the profit of a small restaurant which sites in a downtown business block throughout 7th-13th of October.
Overall, it can be taken into consideration that public catering has dinner as the most lucrative period of the day throughout the week. Moreover, it is also noticeable that on both lunch and dinner, the company had a static flow with the difference of plus or minus approximately one hundred and fifty dollars.
With regards to the lunchtime, a restaurant kept the plank over $2,200 dollars per lunch in all seven days except weekends. Where Saturday and Sunday were the most disadvantaged days for an establishment, with an earning of $1,950 and $1,550 respectively. Whereas the most profitable afternoon was the Wednesday, taking to the cashier about $2,600.
Meanwhile, dinners had to be the most beneficial hours during the day. With a gap of about several hours, dinnertimes provided $1,200 more than lunches did. During the week, a company had its most fruitful day on Friday and although it is the most profitable part of 24 hours, it also has its lowest on weekends repeatedly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80598926722 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3482527814 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550117979324 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238991906345 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489985296495 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479391793673 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653029123712 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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