With the introduction of the internet, the globalized world has been drawing attention to the alternative method of shopping, since it became significantly widespread among citizens of the world. Although there are many frauds in the digital universe that can double-cross a customer, the luxurious comforts that come with online shopping do outweigh the drawbacks.
One of the main disadvantages of ordering desired items through websites is that one might be duped by hoodlums on the internet. In other words, while purchasing a product, a person might be tricked into unsafe websites that in fact, carbon-copy one's credit card data or personal information that results in loss of cash and invasion of privacy of an individual. For example, the local victim in my neighborhood became a victim of such hackers and frauds, he was deceived for $10,000 during ordering DIY tools for reconstruction of his apartment. Unfortunately, there are a plethora of such scammers on the vast platform like the Internet.
However, with the invention of the digital era, there are corresponding people that contribute to the welfare of the society in the virtual world such as cyber policemen, programmers, and authorities that monitor transactions and if necessary find the hacker by IP-addresses. Thus, internet fraudsters don't embody the menace that most generation Y talks about. Moreover, those scarce hoodlums can not compare with the convenience of online shopping. For instance, people in the present days can order those products and get delivered them for a small price or even for free. It is no longer required to commute to shopping malls or dedicate a special day for purchasing considering it is now possible to do by just clicking buttons and links.
In conclusion, online-scammers that are the chief cause of the drawback of online shopping, however, those insignificant disadvantages don't affect the privileges of online buying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...safe websites that in fact, carbon-copy ones credit card data or personal informatio...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...IP-addresses. Thus, internet fraudsters dont embody the menace that most generation ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ever, those insignificant disadvantages dont affect the privileges of online buying....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32247557003 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07425253649 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7251536407 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102424367284 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366485002594 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024620581913 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546584808981 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221912110523 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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