the table below shows the television viewer figures for sports by country, in million

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the table below shows the television viewer figures for sports by country, in million

the table show the number of people in million who watch sports on the television
It's show the figures os viewer for four countries
As can be seen from the table USA is the country which have highest number of people watching sports with 25,2 million people. Follow by is UK with 20,3 million people. The number of Canada is lowest with 14,5 million people
In all four countries. Tenis is highest with 25,9 million people ( about 6-7 million viewer watch it ). Next is golf with 21,9 million people that USA is very popular with 12,3 million viewer. the figures for motor racing and athletics are 12,7 and 16,9 million people respectively

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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the table show the number of people in mill...
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the table show the number of people in million who wat...
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the table show the number of people in million who watch sports on the television It...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...llion who watch sports on the television Its show the figures os viewer for four ...
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...sports on the television Its show the figures os viewer for four countries As can b...
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...the figures os viewer for four countries As can be seen from the table USA is the...
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...from the table USA is the country which have highest number of people watching sports with 2...
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...anada is lowest with 14,5 million people In all four countries. Tenis is highest ...
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...ur countries. Tenis is highest with 25,9 million people about 6-7 million viewer...
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...nis is highest with 25,9 million people about 6-7 million viewer watch it . Next...
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...eople about 6-7 million viewer watch it . Next is golf with 21,9 million people t...
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... very popular with 12,3 million viewer. the figures for motor racing and athletics ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 529.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72321428571 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09590705337 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 283.868780488 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.4298412586 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33209113769 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163869719054 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108926095582 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249281073293 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857198520575 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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