The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country in millions Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the viewing figure of television for sports by some of country. Television viewing figure for sports in Australia, UK, USA and Canada are diffidrent, tennis and golf are the most popular with 25.9 and 21.9 million views of total.
In Australia, tennis is a sport which the most popular with 6.2 million and a athletics at least with the viewing figure only half of tennis. The viewing of sport channel about Tennis and motor racing in television are similar, beside that, the viewing of golf and athletics is lower than tennis and motor racing in turn 2.8 and 4.5 million views. In other country, the USA have significant difference of viewing sports channel, if the viewing of golf is very high with 11.2 million views, the views in motor racing is only 1.5 million views, about six times less than golf. Finally, Canada is the country have the value watch motor racing is lowest of 4 sport channel, even lowest of 4 country about every the value.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h the most popular with 6.2 million and a athletics at least with the viewing fig...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'channel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'channels'.
Suggestion: channels
...watch motor racing is lowest of 4 sport channel, even lowest of 4 country about every t...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21698382967 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464705882353 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6992895358 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23903851571 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15625181237 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742805114337 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232097818698 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649582008866 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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