**The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006, 2007 and 2014.**
**Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.**
Given is the table that illustrates the proportion of manufacturers' laptop market share in the world from 2006 to 2014.
Overall, it can be deduced from the table that the figure for HP, Dell, Samsung, Toshiba and Lenovo witnessed an upward trend while the opposite was true for that of the rest Fujitsu and others in the research period.
As can be seen from the table, the most favorite company producing laptop in the world is HP. Starting at 31.4% in 2006, the HP's percentage of market share saw a rise to 34% after one year before reaching the highest point at 34.25% in the year 2014. The proportion of Dell' notebook computer market share also experienced a significant growth of approximately 6% in the end of the period after going up from 16.6% in 2006 to 20.2% in 2007. Similarly, a gradual climb was observed in the statistic for Toshiba, which went up by about 1% in the first 2 years, from which point it continually rose to 8.12% in the last year of the period. Beside, the figure for market share of 2 manufacturers Samsung and Lenovo witnessed the same trend over the research period. Specifically, these two companies saw a slight decrease of around 1% with Samsung and 0.4% with the rest in the year 2007, from which point they in turn surged to 14.20% and 7.10% in the final year.
Looking at the table in more detail, in contrast, the other manufacturers generally followed the same downward trend over the years. Starting with 4.8% in the first year, the figure for Fujitsu went down to 2.3% in the next year prior to growing minimal to the percentage to 3.1% in the final year. The research period also underwent an plunge in the others' proportion of laptop market share, which reach the lowest point at 7.11% in 2014 after declining by 3.5% in two first research years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 33.7804878049 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 320.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63125 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44386189002 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1196463522 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227885039669 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100708637182 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688257406869 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160659951812 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719360076288 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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