The table beneath shows the level of people specialists in various
kinds of enterprises in 1990, 2000, and 2010. Sum up the data by
choosing and writing about the primary capacities and make
correlations where fitting
The given tabular chart compares the proportion of both genders employed
in retail, health, manufacturing, and tourism from 1990 to 2010.
It is worth considering that, the proportion of employees in the
manufacturing sector fell among both the genders 30% for men and 7% for
women were employed in manufacturing in 1990, but in 2010, the
percentage reached the figures were 10% for men and 3% for women. In
the retail sector, the proportion of male employees remained stable at 13%
over the two decades. While the ratio of female employees rose from 7% to
9% during the given period of tenure.
In the tourism sector, the proportion fell for male employees from 13% to
10% in the given period of years. Whereas the ratio of female employees
rose from just under a quarter in 1990 and just over a quarter in
2010. The percentage of male employees in health sector stood at 7% in 199
0, while the figure for female employees was 9%. In 2010, both the genders
witnessed an increase was noticed 9% and 15% respectively.
Overall, it can be seen that the manufacturing sector had the maximum
ratio of male employment. However, the tourism sector had the highest
proportion of female employment. In the given period of two decades the
percentage of women employment continuously rose.
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- The table beneath shows the level of people specialists in various kinds of enterprises in 1990 2000 and 2010 Sum up the data by choosing and writing about the primary capacities and make correlations where fitting 11
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 23, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed stable at 13% over the two decades. While the ratio of female employees rose from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96818181818 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75730060232 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436363636364 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6240396297 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0362333957554 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0155970953455 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216949473095 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0148145364414 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286186489289 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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