The table gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
The tabular chart reveals that information about presentation on internet use all ages group.It is give six items.
First of all,teenager are most using the online games and get news.Therefore,it is rise proportion in the chart as well as they do not like product research than it is zero percentage but also 40 age is climb activity like the product research.
secondly,the searching for people this activity all ages near awareness instead of 70 ages is fall up active this activity.Hence,buying a product 20 to 60 ages is little bit reduce as far as they is interest product.lastly, 60 to 70 age group can not like downloads.
All said the down,kids is most active in online games all in all they are dislike product research.otherwise,60 to 70 ages is not like downloads if they is active product research.
- some people believe the range of technology available to individual today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people.other think it is having an opposite effect.Discuss both views and give your opinion? 56
- Tourism has become an integral part of modern lifestyle.people travel to relax to explore the beauties of nature and wildlife,to visit historical monuments and museums and also to discover new cultures. 67
- In many countries are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this as completely wrong?while others consider it a valuable work experience ,which is important for learning and talking responsibility .what is your opinion? 56
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world .Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and giv 61
- The chart below gives information about global sales of games software,CDs and DVD or video 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4673439792 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8931339971 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 25.0 5.23603664747 477% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127993710638 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11095818178 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115346347519 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11095818178 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115346347519 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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