The table shows the portion of income spend in five European country like: France, Germany, UK, Turkey and Spain on monthly basis for four household uses that include food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The substantial amount of expenditure is by UK for housing (37%) and least amount of expenditure is made by France for clothing (7%). Expenditure on housing is high in country like France, Germany and UK. And expenditure on food and drinks is high on Turkey and Spain.
It is apparent that the huge amount of income is spend on housing, food and drinks on five different European country on monthly basis. In contrast, least amount of money is spend by country like France, Germany and Spain for clothing. However, Turkey expenditure on entertainment (10%) is less that clothing(12%). It depicts clothing is less preferable household for making expenditure in these countries. And UK is only country that spends equal amount of money on clothing and entertainment.
In conclusion, some European countries spend huge amount on housing and some spend highly on food and drinks. Where as least amount of money is spend on clothing and entertainment. Therefore, housing, food and drinks are preferable decision for making expenditure for European people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
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Line 6, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
.... In contrast, least amount of money is spend by country like France, Germany and Spa...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...d some spend highly on food and drinks. Where as least amount of money is spend on cloth...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...inks. Where as least amount of money is spend on clothing and entertainment. Therefor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25853658537 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84760249617 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0415609136 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401380878981 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172689007424 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151804758427 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310935298309 0.15604864568 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153039620514 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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