The table shows data about the underground railway system in six major cities with date opened kilometer or route and passenger numbers per year in millions

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The table shows data about the underground railway system in six major cities with date opened, kilometer or route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table depicts the information about the six underground railway systems in terms of the opening date, their length, and annual passengers.
Overall, the emerging fact from the graph is that although Tokyo highest number of travellers per year, London was the oldest and longest system. The two newest underground systems in Kyoto and Los Angeles were much shorter and have fewer passengers than others.
Looking in more details at the opening dates, London was the oldest system had opened in 1863, 37 years before the Paris underground. However, Tokyo, Washington and Kyoto all opened in 21 century, whereas La was only opened after a millennium in 2001. Likewise, the oldest lines were the longest, with London and Tokyo measuring 394 and 199km respectively.
Marching forward, Tokyo clearly carries the most people each year almost 2 billion, while 1191 billion use the Paris railway and 75 million travel in London system. with regards to the number drop considerably in other cities. Also, there are 144 million travellers in Washington and around a third of that in the other two lines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
..., Washington and Kyoto all opened in 21 century, whereas La was only opened after a mil...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...and 75 million travel in London system. with regards to the number drop considerably...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, look, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46859284154 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4062243223 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292807906318 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110476694746 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771563788917 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180686657855 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721474614001 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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