The table graphs compare the sale of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in term of 5 different nations, namely the UK, Switzerland, Denmark. Belgium and Sweden, over a period of 8 years.
Overall, Fairtrade coffee in the UK and bananas in Switzerland had a sharp increase from 1999 to 2004, while Sweden and Denmark witnessed a slight decrease in its bananas fair price figure.
In sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee, the figure for coffee in the UK was respondibled for 20 million of euros in 2004 with nearly 20 times higher than its in 1999. Meanwhile, Switzerland fairtrade coffee represented 6 million of euros in 2004. Beside, Sweden reached the lowest coffee fair price in 5 countries with 0.8 millions in 1999 and 1 million in 2004. As can be seen that, there was a very minimal climb in this nation during a period of 8 years.
In second table, Switzerland was the country which had the highest sales of bananas with 15 million of euros in 1999 and 47 million of euros in 2004. Likewise, the UK and Belgium experienced a gentle rise with around 5 million. In contrast, the figure for fairtrade bananas in Sweden and Denmark fell gradually in sequence from 1.8 and 2 to 1 and 0.9 million of euros.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...r coffee in the UK was respondibled for 20 millions of euros in 2004 with nearly 20 times high...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...witzerland fairtrade coffee represented 6 millions of euros in 2004.Beside, Sweden reached th...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...represented 6 millions of euros in 2004.Beside, Sweden reached the lowest coffee fair ...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...h had the highest sales of bananas with 15 millions of euros in 1999 and 47 millions of euros ...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
...s with 15 millions of euros in 1999 and 47 millions of euros in 2004. Likewise, the UK and Bel...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...y in sequence from 1.8 and 2 to 1 and 0.9 millions of euros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83490566038 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9330179576 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2005219284 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191326399341 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830102897359 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065757947775 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133855904 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192093311152 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...r coffee in the UK was respondibled for 20 millions of euros in 2004 with nearly 20 times high...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...witzerland fairtrade coffee represented 6 millions of euros in 2004.Beside, Sweden reached th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...represented 6 millions of euros in 2004.Beside, Sweden reached the lowest coffee fair ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...h had the highest sales of bananas with 15 millions of euros in 1999 and 47 millions of euros ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
...s with 15 millions of euros in 1999 and 47 millions of euros in 2004. Likewise, the UK and Bel...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...y in sequence from 1.8 and 2 to 1 and 0.9 millions of euros.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83490566038 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9330179576 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2005219284 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191326399341 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830102897359 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065757947775 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133855904 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192093311152 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.