The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

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The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

The given tabular chart depicts the information about world population of 1950 and 2000 by different countries such as; Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North America and oceanis with the prediction of 2050. The data is calibrated in per centum.

It can be seen that in the year of 1950 the population was 2.5 billions. After that according to regions in Africa it was only 9%. Apart from this distribution of world population by region the Europe was 22%. Moreover, the population of Asia, Latin America, North America had been 56%,6% and 7% respectively.

In addition to this in the year of 2000 was 6.0 billions. As well as the population of Africa was 13 %. Moreover, the population in the year of 2050 will be 9.0 billions. On the basis of region in Oceanis, North America and Europe the population will be 1%, 4% and 7% respectively.

At the end, figure overall present that the amount of population in Asia was very highest,and the amount of population in Oceanis was very lowest.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71063137845 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1904714283 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2727272727 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178050999005 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069953525473 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605046981142 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116451363637 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052158669323 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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