The two tables compare the differences in the temperatures and the length of daytime, which is indicated by the sunrise and sunset time, during Friday, Saturday and Sundaybetween two cities in India and Russia, namely Mumbai and Moscow in May in 2007.
Overall, the weather in Mumbai, with a predictable temperature,was remarkably hotter than in Moscow. Moreover, the daytime in Moscow was much longer than that in India.
Regarding the table of Mumbai, the temperature range was virtually unnoticeable when the maximum temperature during the three mentioned days was 33-34oC, whereas the hottest time was recorded at 29oC. 13 hours was the length of daytime in this city where the time of sunrise and sunset to be consistent g at 6:00 to around 19:12.
Unlike Mumbai, there was a significant difference in the temperature in Moscow. Sunday was the hottest day when the temperature ranged between 17 oC and 8 oC. 13oC was the highest degree on Moscow’s Saturday, which was higher than 8oC on Friday, it could decrease to only 2oC becoming the smallest figure among the table on the same day. Moscow enjoyed 18 hours of daytime, beginning when the sun rose at 4:51 and ending at 22:04.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73378857997 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1010092661 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152959995974 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679558430514 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332070541884 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974746740517 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331589458288 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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