With the rapid pace of industrialisation, besides improving human quality of life, it could be the key culprit of environmental destruction which is associated with the existence of the planet. In the modern era, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the extinction of certain plants and animals are the most vexing issues or not. In this essay, I would scrutinize both views before giving my final opinion.
On the one hand, it is undoubted that many species have been put to the verge of extinction causing tremendous impact on our lives. The key rationale could be that each species is an opponent in the natural food chain. In other words, if a type of animal or plant died out, it could lead to the decline of others fed by them. This phenomenon aggravates the current system of biodiversity which people depend heavily on. This circumstance compounded with the loss of medical treatment which could be produced from some sources of plants and animals. This, thus, has a foreseeable impact on human health.
On the other hand, many people assert that there are more serious problems that our community is urged to take measures to tackle. Environmental pollution could be concrete evidence. For example, in Vietnam, water pollution is a current issue in the countryside. It has visible impacts bearing on citizens living nearby since it deteriorates living conditions and further results in several illnesses, such as chronic headache or even cancer.
However, I am of the opinion that every environment-related problem is no less important than the others. In the long term, all of our actions would be reflected in the appearance of mother nature and decide the well-being of the next generation in the future. We, therefore, have to take minor but stable steps by adapting the green lifestyle and raise others awareness about the environmental problems as well as its danger.
In conclusion, after indicating all the demerits of the biodiversity loss and the other environmental problems, I would convey that all of those problems are of significance to our lives which require immediate actions from society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rom some sources of plants and animals. This, thus, has a foreseeable impact on huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12146892655 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91487236364 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5547650634 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245704722776 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066628265722 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506642079915 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125041348341 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122395997316 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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