The tabular chart illustrates about the residents in six nations and the non-rural population was escalated in 2008.The data
has been represent in the percentage.
overview,it is evident to clear that the highest population density in China and the fewer population density in Canada.However,urbanization rate was maximum in Canada and minimum in Uruguay nation.
Having a quick glance on the tabluar chart,the China's population rate was high rather then other nations it was 34,876km2 in 2008 and the India was second highest(23,980) population density in nation.Morever,the population rate sharply decreased by 10,600 in eEgypt.The 12,310 residents were belong from Uruguary.Whereas,the least populace density from Canada and United state of America it was 2,000 and 5,500 respectively.
Probing ahead,the urbanization rate was below 100% in Canada and exactly 87% in USA.The Uruguay's rate was almost a quater (23%).Furthermore,it was increased by 14percent inEgypt.The population rate 43% in india and below two third in china.
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008 67
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008. 73
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, will projection till 2050. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, second, then, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78431372549 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75261311265 2.65546596893 141% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.633076837 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.25 112.824112599 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29731418962 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198307107021 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635957829935 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161075400084 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967466379941 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 61.2550243902 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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