Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.
The table and charts show some information about different sports in one country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table provides information about four sports in terms of their attendance and total earnings. The pie charts compare different sources of revenue of ice hockey and football.
Overall, there seems to be no clear link between the number of attendees and the amount of money earned for all 4 sports. Also, it is noteworthy that while most of ice hockey's earning comes from tickets, TV is the predominant source of revenue for football.
Looking at the table in detail reveals that while attendance for baseball reaches 73 million, the sport only earns 10 billion. In comparison, football, which only attracts 17 million attendees earns up to 13 billion in revenue. As for basketball and ice hockey, the two sports draw in 22 million attendees but the former outearns the latter by 1 billion.
Regarding sources of earning, nearly half of ice hockey's revenue comes from tickets, which is more than double the figure for concessions (22%). TV makes up for about one fifth while the proportion for concessions is only 13 percent. By contrast, TV is the main earner for football, comprising 38% of the total income, while concessions earn the least. In addition, earnings by concessions and sponsorship are more comparable, standing at 26% and 22%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...%. TV makes up for about one fifth while the proportion for concessions is only 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07177033493 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73117323696 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.852625483 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964846759929 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447124358985 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466419297679 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709331937161 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593300642204 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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