Talk about the money
Money plays a vital part in our lives. In several aspects, it is the most important thing in life. It is therefore much sought after.
Without money, we could not buy our food, clothes, and all the other things that we need to live comfortably. We require money to travel, buy medicine when we are ill, and also to pay for the services rendered to us by others. In truth, money is almost indispensable to our survival. Most of our activities are therefore directed towards earning as much money as possible. We use money not only to meet the primary needs of life but also to pay for our advancement. We use it for education which helps us to live a better life. Thousands of students are unable to attend school or continue their studies for want of money. Lack of money also causes great hardship and sorrow in hundreds of families. Thousands of people are dying every day throughout the world because they are not able to pay their doctor's fees or because they cannot buy nutritious food.
Because of its importance, many crimes are committed every day in all parts of the world to gain possession of it. Some are driven by hunger and desperation to steal, rob, and even kill to get at
least what they require to keep bodies and souls together. Others commit the most serious crimes out of
sheer greed for money. Such people cause much trouble and unpleasantness in society, and to bring
them to justice, large sums of money are spent by every government.
Today, millions of dollars are being spent by various governments in the world for the
betterment of the people. Numerous schools and hospitals are being built, and hundreds of acres of
land are being cultivated to produce more food for the growing population of the world. As a result,
the world is gradually becoming a better place to live in.
At the same time, however, much money is being wasted on producing deadly weapons of war.
Countries that have more money than others have become more powerful by strengthening their
armed forces. This has led to rivalries among powerful nations, and several parts of the world are
in turmoil. All this shows what an important part money plays in human affairs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...kill to get at least what they require to keep bodies and souls together. Others commi...
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Line 14, column 33, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'important part money'.
Suggestion: important part money
...ld are in turmoil. All this shows what an important part money plays in human affairs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 383.0 196.424390244 195% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7180156658 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45221565156 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 106.607317073 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532637075718 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 283.868780488 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 8.94146341463 257% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.412871817 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5652173913 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4347826087 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164381339621 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558437641714 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051055656249 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509235620707 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053428532427 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 40.7170731707 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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