The chart illustrate the amount of people visiting variety of museums located in London.
It is clear that people living in UK visit British museum more often than the others and both August and September got the highest rate of all which are mostly above 350,000. Moreover, the popularity of National museum was fall into around 200,000 people, being the lowest figure.
Looking at the British museums, it seems to be the second highest in the chart with reaching a peak at 7 thousands of visitors in August. On the other hand, from September the interest of public in this location start to decline steadily at around 15% lower each month later on. While the other popular museums which was Science museum witnessed going up and down slightly several times, it remain almost stable. Subsequently, there was a gradual decrease from 5 to only 3 thousands people in October.
From June to October, there was nearly no changes in the number of visitors came to the National museum besides August, the British went to this place more often leading to the museums ascend temporarily to 3 thousands visitor but then drop quickly again.
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- Task 1 The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The chart illustrate the amount of people visiting variety o...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '7 thousand'.
Suggestion: 7 thousand
...st in the chart with reaching a peak at 7 thousands of visitors in August. On the other hand, ...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
... up and down slightly several times, it remain almost stable. Subsequently, there was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, moreover, second, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87564766839 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35384900045 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3225096814 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124035438753 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640971717945 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662367185792 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104442246501 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729426340248 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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