Task 1: The graph shows the percentages of people going to cinemas in a European country on different days
Depicted on the informational diagram is the data about the proportion of citizens going to cinemas in a country in Europe on all days during a week in three separate years, 2003, 2005 and 2007.
As an overall trend, paying a visit to cinemas on Fridays and weekends was popular, which was opposite to the other weekdays.
A first glance into the chart reveals that Saturdays ranked the dominant varying within 43- 45% in three various years, in which that of 2005 demonstrated the highest percentage. It is worth to discern that this was roughly 10%-15% higher than the figure of cinema-visitors on Fridays and Sundays. Interestingly, the number of citizens paying a visit to the cinemas on Fridays were equal with 30% in three periods.
A closer look into the graph indicates that during both weekdays in 2003 and 2005, cinema’s choice were preferable on Tuesdays, with 20% and approximately 15% respectively. Whereas, it is unpopular to come to cinemas on Mondays in 2003 and Wednesdays in 2005. The figure of movie-goers in 2007 witness a moderate fluctuations with highs in Tuesdays and Thursdays and lows in Wednesdays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'fluctuation'?
Suggestion: fluctuation
... movie-goers in 2007 witness a moderate fluctuations with highs in Tuesdays and Thursdays an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00529100529 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8991619192 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1992098633 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123097139935 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512541290219 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457375232025 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07676795613 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465015171357 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.