The table compares proportion of inhabitants of a particular town at different age category who rode bicycle in 2011.
Overall, women rode bicycle more than men in all five groups and there was decrease number of citizens who used their bicycle as the age increased with exception of oldest group (60+) ,which bucked this trend.
Looking through the youngest group, we find that this group has the highest number of cyclist at 51.3% for female and 50.3% for men. Although second age group has lower number of citizens who used bicycle at 42.2% women and 24.6% men, they still rode bicycle much more than other groups. As mentioned earlier, significant gulf between men and women was illustrated in second group.
However, as the population grew older the percentage of cycling dropped at, women still rode more than men. While this decreasing trend continued, the oldest group (60+) experienced slight increase of cyclist at 18.5% for women and 13.2% for men. Age group 40-59 had the lowest proportion at 12.3% and 8.0% for women and men respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
...3% in 40-59 and 18.5% for 60 and higher compared to 9.7%, 8.0% and 13.2% for men respe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02083333333 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77245801366 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.714157246 43.030603864 415% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.0 112.824112599 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198616038442 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140510706915 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595470338624 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126229827783 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335734953224 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.2329268293 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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