1. In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?
Adolescents have been known as a growing source of social problems recently. Several people maintain that the reason for this important issue is that our modern lifestyle is taking valuable supervising time from parents. I completely agree with this notion.
The primary reason for the recent social problems involving teenagers is that they have more access to unsuitable TV programs, when parents are absent. In recent years, there has been a growing interest among moviemakers towards action movies. As a result of the potential success of this genre, the number of movies that have been produced has increased dramatically. Unsupervised teenagers, who have a tendency towards these movies, have instant access to them through different TV channels. These movies, in addition, may encourage unconventional behaviors, such as drug abuse or violence. Therefore, teenagers who watch these films may be encouraged to show aggressive behavior in society or develop a sense of curiosity towards drugs.
Psychological diseases are another reason for social problems among adolescents. Teenagers are prone to different mental disorders, depression, for instance, when they are left alone. Researches have confirmed that one of the reasons for developing depression maybe lack of appropriate communication. If teenagers feel isolated at home, they will turn to social media for their needed interactions. These types of communication cannot develop a sense of satisfaction and may endanger adolescents to deprivation of social interaction. Therefore, they are more likely to suffer from depression in the long run.
In conclusion, parents' tight schedule not only has led to more accessible access to violent TV programs for teenagers, but it has also made them vulnerable to unproductive interactions in social media, which can result in depression in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76842105263 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20938528281 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9447939687 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212937530794 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727847871999 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585070576795 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12311414327 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644122124003 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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