The table provides information about proportion of people riding their bicycles in different age groups at a town in 2011.
What stands out is that women in all ages rode bicycle considerably more than men. The age group 0-9 consists of the highest number of riders, while people between 40-59 years old used their bicycles at lowest numbers.
Around half of the population of age group 0-9 in both genders rode bicycle. This number considerably dropped in the next age group (10-17), which was in boys at 24.6% and girls at 42.2%. This group were the second most bicycle riders. Besides it demonstrates that female’s group percentage was twice as many as male’s.
Men between 40-59 years old had the lowest percentage of bicycle riding at 8%. In this category women had also the lowest number of users among their own gender at 12.3%.The second fewest number of people riding bicycle belonged to 18-39 age group in female and male at 17.1% and 9.7% respectively. However, this percentage among women were still higher than men in 60+ age category which was 13.2%.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: LAKHANH
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89010989011 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39010357458 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554945054945 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.726278629 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258150326096 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122966014147 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632585615259 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18772537026 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568900278758 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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