The table compares the proportions of people who rode a bike, by age and gender, in 2011.
In general, there are more female riders than male in all age groups and kids under the age of 9 years old uses bicycle most while the lowest figure by the 40 to 59 age group.
Among female, around 53 per cent of female kids under the age of 9 rode a bicycle in 2011, and when it comes to age group 10 to 17 only 42 per cent of female kids rides the bicycle, this figure dropped to one third by the 18 to 39 age group. However, the popularity among male kids depicts a drastic drop, 50 per cent to 24 per cent by the age 10 to 17 years. that figure dropped to 9.7 per cent by the next age group.
Although, the last group depicts an increase in the numbers of riders compared to the 40 to 59 age group. Moreover, around 18 and 13 per cent of female and male ride a bicycle respectively when it comes to the 60 plus age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, third, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18333333333 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39914465211 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.297039705 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.6 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255013814023 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159199956896 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868253422354 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1893036496 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479327604494 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.56 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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