The table above illustrates the proportion of the population of one town by 5 age groups who rode bicycles in the year of 2011.
Overall, under half of the total populations - both female and male in each group - used bicycles in 2011. The percentage of children under 9 years of age who rode on their bicycle represents the highest amount, while the lowest percentage belonged to the middle-aged group.
In further details, 51,3% of girls and 50,3% of boys under 9 rode on their bikes in 2011. These percentages declined as we take older age groups into account, with the percentage for female bike-rider declining to 42,2% at the age of 10-17, then to 17,1% among the 18-39 age group. Similarly for the male population, only 24,6% of teenage boys and 9.7% of young adults used bike. At the ripe age of 40-59, only 12,3% of the female population used bikes, while only 8,0% of the men did. The elderly are more likely to ride bicycles, with female and male riders staying at 18,5% and 13,2% respectively.
- Task1 - 2: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. 78
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs believing that this will make their staff healthier abd thus more effective at work Other employers see no benefit in doing so Consider the arguments from both aspects o 77
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...hen to 17,1% among the 18-39 age group. Similarly for the male population, only 24,6% of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70621468927 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48866222205 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.697180891 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376865071618 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169824606129 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173589349006 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348744754429 0.15604864568 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167182417326 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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