TERBAIK 0856 9787 7225 Membersihkan panci gosong secara alami jakarta AHLINYA 0856 9787 7225 Cara membersihkan panci gosong bagian dalam jawa timur TERJAMIN 0856 9787 7225 Cara membersihkan panci gosong bagian luar jawa barat Membersihkan panci gosong den

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TERBAIK, 0856.9787.7225 Membersihkan panci gosong secara alami jakarta, AHLINYA, 0856.9787.7225 Cara membersihkan panci gosong bagian dalam jawa timur, TERJAMIN, 0856.9787.7225 Cara membersihkan panci gosong bagian luar jawa barat, Membersihkan panci gosong dengan baking soda jawa tengah TERBAIK, 085697877225

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Clean Beauty Cleaner KOREAN PRODUCT : Krim yang efektif membersihkan bahan dari permukaan Logam, stainless steel dari kerak-kerak membandel seperti kerak gosong, karat, bekas makanan membandel dan lain-lain serta membuat menjadi kilap berkilau seperti baru

Efektif digunakan untuk: Wajan, Oven, Penggorengan, Dandang, Teflon, Keran air, Shower, Teko, dan bahan-bahan logam lainnya

Komposisi aman tidak mengandung bahan yang merusak dan membuat baret
Kemasan Ukuran : 500 gr

Cara Pemakaian:
1. Ambil secukupnya krim dari kemasannya
2. oleskan secara merata pada permukaan yang akan dibersihkan
3. biarkan selama 3-5 menit
4. Gosok Menggunakan scrubbing pad (merah atau putih)
5. Ulangi Langkang 1-4 jika diperlukan
6. Bilas dengan air bersih

Tanggal yang tertera dibawah kemasan adalah TANGGAL PRODUKSI, kadaluarsa 3 TAHUN dari tanggal produksi

Info Pemesanan :
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WA : 0856-9787-7225
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oleskan
...bil secukupnya krim dari kemasannya 2. oleskan secara merata pada permukaan yang akan ...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Biarkan
...ada permukaan yang akan dibersihkan 3. biarkan selama 3-5 menit 4. Gosok Menggunakan ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 33.7804878049 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 9.49473684211 4.92477711251 193% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.8286559105 2.65546596893 445% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.742105263158 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 283.868780488 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.45097560976 200% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 328.519025324 43.030603864 763% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.5 112.824112599 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400366867133 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719885488881 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147840090511 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775639073411 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184313388698 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.2329268293 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -61.85 61.2550243902 -101% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.6 10.3012195122 268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.06 11.4140731707 333% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.0 8.06136585366 186% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 40.7170731707 302% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 11.4329268293 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oleskan
...bil secukupnya krim dari kemasannya 2. oleskan secara merata pada permukaan yang akan ...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Biarkan
...ada permukaan yang akan dibersihkan 3. biarkan selama 3-5 menit 4. Gosok Menggunakan ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 33.7804878049 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 9.49473684211 4.92477711251 193% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.8286559105 2.65546596893 445% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.742105263158 0.547539520022 136% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 283.868780488 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.45097560976 200% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 328.519025324 43.030603864 763% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.5 112.824112599 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400366867133 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719885488881 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147840090511 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775639073411 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184313388698 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.2329268293 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -61.85 61.2550243902 -101% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.6 10.3012195122 268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.06 11.4140731707 333% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.0 8.06136585366 186% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 40.7170731707 302% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 11.4329268293 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.