The bar chart illustrates the divorce rates between Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. It can be seen that the numbers of Finish divorcees fell drastically from a rate of 350 in 2011 to 300 in 2012, but rose again through the years that followed, causing a steady fast rate of twenty percent.
The Swedish divorcees on the other hand, start relatively high at a starting point of 420 rate in 2011 and continue to raise at a twenty percent rate in 2012. However, the numbers gradually decline between 2013 and 2015, making a significant decrease of fifty percent each decade. This led to raise in rate of Finish divorcees from 380 to 400 in this period.
Although, Sweden continue to make up the high divorce in these two European countries, their divorce rate sharply increased in this period. In 2013 for example, shows that there were two Finish divorcees to every three Swedish divorcees, but by 2015, this rate had narrowed down to a ten percent rate of Swedish divorcees.
Overall, we can see a clear upward trend in the Finish divorcees, while the Swedish divorcees seem to have leveled off.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sweden) must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
...400 in this period. Although, Sweden continue to make up the high divorce in these tw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75129533679 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4147079016 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1908667061 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308989991829 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139926372721 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108931568903 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172762698058 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116675510746 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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