The three pictures show a train station before during and after construction changes

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The three pictures show a train station before, during and after construction changes

The picture illustrates the alteration of Toronto Go Train Station in several stages, the transit concourse will totally transform.

Overall, some developments in the transit area will be totally redeveloped. The changes will consist of a new ground of transit area and the capacity of the former transit area.

The development of a new ground station will establish at first, causing this ground unused temporarily. During construction, passengers will be concentrated in the existing track level, leading more people standing in there while waiting for their departure time. The land underground will be scraped gradually from the east to the west area of the station, whereas the main pole will be cut and hold by the iron small pole set, sustaining from the ground and hanging up from the track level. After redevelopment, the new level will exist, providing more space for retails as well as additional facilities for passengers if they must wait for a long time. Moreover, the former level between the upper and lower ground is still used for transit concourse, raising the capacity of the level for more passengers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1693989071 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7501706749 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579234972678 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5461488234 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824212825966 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410308501207 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432487667902 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742481585235 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520680193847 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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