Traditional Yemeni Wedding
Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties in which they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they dress them delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of these people has his customs and traditions. For example, in Yemeni society, they have three main steps to celebrate weddings: engagement, wedding vows, and wedding party.
Initially, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house, and they take a good look at her. Then they get back to the man and describe her to him. Moreover, the man has the right to take a legitimate look at the girl. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl to the young man. If the opposite happens, then everything goes back to its normal way.
The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become legally a married couple. After the man pays the girl's dowry, they call a Sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic advice, motivating young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or representative what to say.
The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have a lot of fun. For example, a few days before the wedding ceremony we invite people whom we know and have a friendly meeting, and when the big day comes, we kindly welcome the guests, Besides, we bring and prepare a big feast for them. In the afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional way like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a night party in which we bring a singer, or make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day we call it "Sharih".
To conclude, styles of wedding ceremonies differ from one country to another and Yemeni weddings are full of religious antique traditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
... married couple. After the man pays the girls dowry, they call a Sheikh to make the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 965.302439024 163% => OK
No of words: 339.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62831858407 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49750269018 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6411499395 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5789473684 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256650096416 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07891807457 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933196894353 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15538915762 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120009817707 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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