THE TWO MAPS BELLOW SHOE THE ISLAND, BEFORE AND AFTER THE CONSTRUCTION OF SOME TOURIST FACILITIES
The picture illustrates the changes, that have taken place in an island, after the construction of touristic attractions.
Firstly, the map shows that the island has passed into a transformation and after drastic changes it was shifted into a resort, saturated with flexible touristic facilities. The major alterations took place in the western and central part of the island, whereas, the eastern part was not modified.
Moreover, there were constructed six accommodations in the western and nine accommodations in the central part of the island. A new building for reception was added between these two group of accommodations, as well as a restaurant not far from the reception. It is observed from the picture vehicle roads, which connect the restaurant and reception to the Pier. Similarly, footpath assembles all the facilities of the resort together.
Furthermore, the beach was turned into a swimming are, Pier was constructed and the island was supported by two boats. The beach expanded it’s swimming area.
Overall, some new apartments, restaurant and reception were added on the map, Pier was constructed and the island was modified into a resort with appropriate facilities.
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- Agree / disagree 3
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- Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive dvelopment, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 11
- Integrated 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10165959752 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3241208872 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233177143171 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863700365381 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672586892128 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138075975778 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440287556661 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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