The two maps below show in before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The two maps illustrate an island in different stages of construction for tourism.
Overall, it is clear to see that after construction the island has more facilities for tourism ( restaurant, reception, pier, and accommodation )
The island is measured approximately 250 meters, surrounded by ocean and has a beach on the left side. After the development, trees on the island doesn’t have any significant changes.
On the second image, the island has two accommodation, one located in the west and other in the center. They also have a reception, which is covered by the vehicle path, leads to the restaurant. The beach has a swimming area connected to the footpath of west accommodation. The pier is situated on the south side of the island for tourists sailed their boats.
- the bar graph below shows the number of television receivers per 1000 inhabitants in the world in 1970 and 1997 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 59
- a survey conducted for the places in which people gain access the internet from 1998 to 2005 77
- The two maps below show in before and after the construction of some tourist facilitiessummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e island has more facilities for tourism restaurant, reception, pier, and accommo...
^^
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rant, reception, pier, and accommodation The island is measured approximately 250...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09375 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11212190224 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4117515619 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860207826047 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409320314708 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384953001517 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631588481432 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383133157312 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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