The two maps below show how the island of Petrichor changed from 1987 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the development of the Petrichor island over the period of time from 1987 to 2017.
Overall, there were signigicant changes in the infrastructure of the island. Within 30 years, not only new housing, transportaion and other infrastucture objects were built, but also an industrial unit has started to function.
In 1987, the island of Petrichor had only Old Ruins and a few small houses. Almost a half of the island was a natural habitat.
By 2017, a plethora of infrastucture objects, as well as a new housing area, have been built.
To the east of the old ruins, a hospital and a shopping center appeared. Furhter to the east, on the coastline, the previous smaller houses were upgraded with the bigger multi-floor dorms. Moreover, a shoe factory opened its doors for new workers. Besides all of that, for convenience reasons, public transporation such as buses were launched, connecting all the mentioned points of interest with a newly built airport on the north-east. New smaller houses were also built neaby the Old Ruins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87442771589 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0043335746 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4545454545 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110091520664 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502973551627 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758959678189 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900420929047 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897884401008 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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