The two maps compare and island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities which is island was previously empty land is complex of tourist after construction.
The island in the beginning was mostly comprised of blank land, the trees is not many grew just two or three palm at the beach of the island.
In the second map there is a significant differences from beginning, it ia provided some facilities such as accommodation, restaurant, voyage, and pier. Some areas are alloted to some building that is : Reception at the middle of island, Restaurant at southern, Pier at Northern, nine accommodation and footpath at western.
Overall, the island at initially devoid of any establishment has transform into plentiful facility, after the reconstruction the hot island ready to provide numerous facilities to tourist
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Herrypatell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: ENTIRELY_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mostly composed of'?
Suggestion: mostly composed of
...tion. The island in the beginning was mostly comprised of blank land, the trees is not many grew ...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'palm' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'palms'.
Suggestion: palms
...rees is not many grew just two or three palm at the beach of the island. In the se...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'difference'?
Suggestion: difference
...n the second map there is a significant differences from beginning, it ia provided some fac...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'transformed'.
Suggestion: transformed
...itially devoid of any establishment has transform into plentiful facility, after the reco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11517833005 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.1319558641 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209525093884 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117248869328 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850717579189 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1369012494 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085573289367 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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