The two maps illustrate the changes of a small island before and after some tourist facilities were built.
As is shown in the first map, the island was a completely wild island in the beginning. Most of this island was covered with forest except the central area without plants and the wester side with a beach.
After being developed, the island has gone through a number of changes mainly from the west to the center. Firstly, the beach was developed with access for tourists to go swimming in the west. Furthermore, a large area of accommodation was constructed in the middle of the island, among which area, a reception center was right located in the middle, surrounded by a restaurant to its north, and two resorts with bunglows of typically tropical style on its western and eastern sides, as well as a pier to its south, where tourists could go sailing.
Meanwhile, vehicle track was designed around the reception, and footpaths were constructed, which made it convinient to go to each of the bunglows and the paths can lead directly to the beach.
Different from the areas above, the forest in the east of the island remained the same as in the first map.
Overall, the accommodation and transportation were considerably improved after the construction of new facilities on the island.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88687782805 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74682623405 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8498074087 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18641563919 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892943704626 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730349707676 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106859252782 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806348899286 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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