the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrates the change that happened on an island before and after the establishment of some tourists facilities. Its area measures in Meters (100 meters). Overall, it can be seen that earlier the island was empty, but after construction it became loaded.
In the pre-construction timing, the island was somehow useless, unoccupied. It only consisted of Palm trees with voided parts. The land has a small shore at the southern end with footpaths that was only seen on this coast.
However, after the construction took place, this piece of land established several tourist facilities. Accommodations were built throughout the area, a pier was constructed on the border to welcome tourists coming from ships or boats. A reception and a restaurant also took place in this part, in addition to vehicle track and footpath began to be spotted clearly all over the land accompanied by swimming activity on the beach.
To end up, the island before construction was just empty, while in the post-construction it was full of all the tourist essentials.
- Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 88
- Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings but many of them lead unhappy lives Do you agree To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting that main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e tourists facilities. Its area measures in Meters 100 meters. Overall, it can be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19653179191 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03736187762 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2203742286 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2114034439 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899526341939 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108707054062 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137669226728 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908813362798 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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