The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the two maps given is an illustration regarding variations to an island before and after some tourist facilities were constructed.
The initial impression from the two given maps is that the empty island has been witnessed radical changes into a tourist attraction with the construction of various facilities encompassing reception, accommodation, restaurant, pier, etc to attract more tourism activities.
The island is about 250 meters long. Before the renovation, this place was surrounded by sea with just having only a small beach in the West and coconut trees but no accommodation or other facilities for tourism.
After the construction and development, the island has changed significantly with many new infrastructures. The reception was built in the center of these facilities. Two accommodation areas were located on the two opposite sides of the reception and a restaurant behind this. Besides, footpaths and vehicle tracks for commuting have been constructed to facilitate the tourists. The footpaths were made to walk between the residing places and the beach where tourists can go swimming while the tracks were erected surrounding the reception to connect with the restaurant and the pier for driving. It is noteworthy that natural features remain unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51256281407 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14258837913 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.7122025878 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237023295613 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859375011706 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865611714388 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158077488003 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975824480888 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.