These two maps illustrate the way to get to a City Hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. There are some differences between these two maps.
Originally, in 2007, there was no Roundabouts built. In contrast, in 2010, 2 Roundabouts were built. The first Roundabout was built in the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road, where the second Roundabout was built in three-way intersection between Ring Road and Hospital Road.
Furthermore, there was removal of Bus Stops which were located in Hospital Rd in 2007. 3 years later, those Bus Stops were replaced by Bus Station. The Bus Station was connected by 2 Roundabouts which was also built in the same year.
In addition, Car Park was divided in 2010, into Public Car Park and Staff Car Park. Public Car Park was located in the northeast side of the town, where Staff Car Park was located in the southeast side of the town. Previously, Car Park was not divided and was used for both Staff and Public, and was located in the southeast side of the town.
Overall, changes between 2007 and 2010 maps are made in the construction of Roundabouts, Bus Station, and division of Car Park.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59807621135 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.520037112 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140020299554 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666165477388 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753051123952 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101307427838 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719293318494 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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